Mrs D

Well done Hannah. This is a good draft. Slow down a bit and think about how you will end the presentation. You also could compare your product to RMAs and point to the things you are discussing to make it more natural. Great terminology and understanding of c and cs. What about Representing social groups? Do more on young females. I look forward to seeing the final draft.

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Mrs D

This looks really good Hannah. You may want to print and check that some of your text doesn't 'bleed' off the page. You show good understanding of layout design. Try and vary font sizes as well as type on your front cover.

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Dolby

I love the layout, house style and variety on your contents page- i would look at the font choice for the main text though- stick to basic and easy to read- maybe Times New Roman. look back to RMA's to compare. Also, don't have too much blank space.

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Mrs D

This is coming on really nicely. Make sure the cover lines don't bleed over the edges and work on the top cover lines and title. The placement is not as successful as the bottom ones.

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Mrs D

This is a great draft Hannah. Well done. Try and consider your genre of music as I'm not sure it is easily recognisable for a your audience. Think about the use of colour and link to the type of music you are covering. Look back at your RMAs in order to help you.

I would agree- just a few tweaks but looking godd. Dolby